That's actually really good. I think adding the occasional harmony to go with the vocals would help add variation to the verses. Also the guitar thing at the end didn't totally fit with the rest of the song in my opinion, but if you had the guitar going in the main loop doing chords or something I think it would have fit better. Really cool feel in general though- my suggestions just come from a compositional standpoint haha
I'm considering either letting the guitar lead into another song that uses it more prominently or just getting rid of it at the end. And that's a good idea, thanks man.
That made me a little bit moist... good reading :3
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