TrohPEE's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[No-Man Episode4]

That's some good shit phil. As usual ;)

SuperPhil64 responds:

Thanks bro! Appreciate it : )

[Willie's Life - Hard Homework]

I'm only saying this to try and be helpful, but the willie character along with most of your characters just don't really appeal to me to be honest. I get that you want to go for a simplistic style, but the thing about a good simplistic art style is that it still has appeal visually. The plot idea was good though really, but I think your art limitations are kind of holding back the humor a bit. I think you should also put more time into making your animations smoother too including the lip syncing looking more natural. I think you have potential if you keep working on your general video quality, but you need to work towards doing things differently than you have been if you want your cartoons to catch on with people. PM me or something if you want to talk more about this

DavisToons responds:

Oh alright. Thanks for the advice.

[Seagull Boy]

Seagull boy is pretty sexy imo, but not 5 star sexy smh

[Pixel Boys]

fucking terrible. try harder next time

[Mus Dash]

This art style is really really nice. In my opinion though, the delivery of some of the comedic parts could have been emphasized with more varied music and sound effects- the slow background jazz tunes sort of eventually dragged the comedic pacing for me because it was playing through pretty much the whole thing. Still was pretty cute though and I got my giggles fo sho.

NorthridgeNG responds:

I understand where you are coming from, also thank you!

[SleepyCast Animated: The Ultimate Sexual Experience]

Your visuals are on point brosicle

[Walking Dud]

I liked it! The joke was funny and the voice actor(I'm guessing that's you?) did a good impression, but I think something you should consider working on is using sound to accent your jokes both in voice acting dynamics in volume (like the last "Carl" I think could have been louder and more exaggerated) and using some kind of background music and sound effects so there isn't just silence (unless its a situation where you need silence to accent the joke). A specific comment I can make is that I think that first shot showing all the zombies is slightly too long though so it kind of looses story momentum. Your visuals are on point though so I don't have anything to comment about that ;)
Again, great stuff boi 11 out of 7 in my book

Ztoons responds:

Thank you very much for the critique! Yes that was myself doing the voices. I see what you mean with working with the sound, especially for the last shot. I wanna say it was my mic that didn't let me get the exaggeration I wanted for it, but I could've just as easily fixed that with some editing software. I also agree that I left the zombie intro go on for a little too long. I'll be sure to keep these things in mind for future cartoons.

Thanks again! Much appreciated!

[The TRUE Winner of NATA!]

CONGRATS I KNEW YOU COULD DO IT!

[PokeGross]

that was just cute as can be :3