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TrohPee

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golfinho responds:

thanks.

This art style is really really nice. In my opinion though, the delivery of some of the comedic parts could have been emphasized with more varied music and sound effects- the slow background jazz tunes sort of eventually dragged the comedic pacing for me because it was playing through pretty much the whole thing. Still was pretty cute though and I got my giggles fo sho.

NorthridgeNG responds:

I understand where you are coming from, also thank you!

Your visuals are on point brosicle

I liked it! The joke was funny and the voice actor(I'm guessing that's you?) did a good impression, but I think something you should consider working on is using sound to accent your jokes both in voice acting dynamics in volume (like the last "Carl" I think could have been louder and more exaggerated) and using some kind of background music and sound effects so there isn't just silence (unless its a situation where you need silence to accent the joke). A specific comment I can make is that I think that first shot showing all the zombies is slightly too long though so it kind of looses story momentum. Your visuals are on point though so I don't have anything to comment about that ;)
Again, great stuff boi 11 out of 7 in my book

Ztoons responds:

Thank you very much for the critique! Yes that was myself doing the voices. I see what you mean with working with the sound, especially for the last shot. I wanna say it was my mic that didn't let me get the exaggeration I wanted for it, but I could've just as easily fixed that with some editing software. I also agree that I left the zombie intro go on for a little too long. I'll be sure to keep these things in mind for future cartoons.

Thanks again! Much appreciated!

CONGRATS I KNEW YOU COULD DO IT!

that was just cute as can be :3

I really liked this and the humor was spot on <3 I think my only critique is that some of the animation could have been smoother, and on the shot where it's just silhouettes the shapes of the characters could have been stronger in my opinion.
But I really liked it overall :3

LinkTCOne responds:

Thanks! Great feedback I appreciate it.

Turned out great! You were able to get the style down pretty nicely :3 Thanks for the special thanks BTW I'm quite honored.

Sketchead responds:

Thanks man! You earned that special thanks nod.

That was hot and educational as hell

Sketchead responds:

Thanks Trohpee <3

Oh Donny, What a Dingleberry!!

I work hard and i play hard haha just kidding haha okay- we have fun here. God Bless you dude.

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